Ghostwriter Wanted

This is the anecdote I sent the writers:

When I was 17 I was interested in a girl I went to high school with.
You can call her N. We had a lot of mutual friends who were trying to
set us up, but both of us were too timid to make a move. One night all
of us went to the beach (in Northern California) and after doing what
any group of kids would do at night at the beach I found myself alone
with N. The rest of the group had intentionally ditched us to help our
romance along. We lay on our backs on the sand and talked about what
our ideas about romantic relationships and other things high school
kids talked about in the 90's. Things became very tense and one of us
suggested we rejoin the group. We got up and found the rest of our
friends waiting expectantly at the cars. When we arrived we were each
taken aside and questioned about whether anything had "happened".